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jargon/terminology
- "recipe"? "ingredients"?
quote marks - avoid
Try to keep sentences 25* words or less. If very lengthy, consider rephrasing and breaking into a bulleted list.
* Sometimes impossible but worth shooting for.
treatment of certain keywords like “project” (OSS vs. customer vs. ?) (BILL: I am not sure here what this means; please elaborate)
if you DO use "e.g." and "i.e.", use commas after these. (However see note above about non-English terminology-needs discussion)